I rewrote the
highlights of President Obama’s State of the Union Address for children.
Although taught in school, real-life politics aren’t typically aimed toward
children. I decided to take Obama’s key ideas and make them legible and
relevant for children. I defined complicated terms and ‘dumbed-down’ the nature
of political language. I focused on short simple sentences as well as making every
sentence as clear as possible. I made smaller paragraphs to align with the
child’s idea of a paragraph. I also bolded subtitles to evoke an ease of
readability. Lastly, I presented the information much like the original
article, in a nonbiased way.
INTRODUCTION
This Tuesday night,
President Barrack Obama presented his State of the Union. The State of the
Union is an important tradition. Since President George Washington, every
president has given a State of the Union. The State of the Union is when a new
or reelected president speaks to the Congress, which has two houses, the House
of Representatives and the Senate. In this speech, the President tells Congress
how America is doing and what he plans to do to make America better. The
President speaks to Congress because both work together to accomplish goals.
SCHOOLS
In President
Barrack Obama’s speech, he talked about several important issues. One issue he
spoke about was early childhood education. This means that President Obama
hopes to give to children with parents who make less money than other parents
an excellent preschool opportunity.
President Obama
also talked about high schools and colleges. He hopes to improve the teaching
skills of high school math, science, and technology teachers. He also wants to
implement a “College Scorecard”. This card will help parents and college
students understand the best colleges they can pay for and which they cannot.
JOBS
President Obama
also talked about minimum wage. Minimum wage is the least amount of hourly pay
that someone can earn at a job. In fact, it is the wage that most of you will
be making at your first job. He hopes to
increase this wage from $7.25 to $9.00 in 2 years. That’s an hourly increase of
24% or $1.75! President Obama will also try to make jobs stay in America instead
of moving to other countries. This will help make our country more successful.
IMMIGRATION
President Obama
talked about immigration, which is a big issue in America. Immigration is the
movement of people from their born country to another country where they
weren’t born. In America, we have a large problem with immigration. There are
correct ways to immigrate to America and illegal ways. In recent years, many
people from Mexico, the country below America, have been coming to America
illegally. President Obama hopes to make a way for people to stay in America who
have already travelled to America illegally. He also hopes to make America
safer by making it harder for people to immigrate here in the wrong ways.
CONCLUSION
Throughout this
article, I have made it clear that this is what President Obama hopes to do. Just because he wants to do
something, doesn’t mean it will actually happen just because he is President.
It will take the teamwork of Congress and the President as well as a lot of
money to make these hopes come true.
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